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YOUR MEMORY

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YOUR MEMORY

YOUR MEMORY


Your memory,
A shadow of the past,
Overcastting the sky of happiness 
Leaving thus the heart in 
The darkness of
Despair! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis 
      24  MAY 2013

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  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Ah yes...The memory...Overcasting its shadow on the beauty of the future. All we can do is leave the past in the past, and take each new step into a bright new future of happy memories. :o) Past mistakes can drive you crazy! Life is a learning experience!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:53:00 PM
    we all may have experienced this feeling in our journey. Your words vividly describe it. very nice.

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    Date: 5/25/2013 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, this is true! We all have! Thank you for visiting!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:04:00 PM
    I think your heart is a Library, full of books only written by you. Amazing Demetrios. Again a 7>>>

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    Date: 5/25/2013 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dearest Therese, how are you? How is my beloved Montreal? Thank you for your visit and your generous comments!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Brilliant metaphor..."overcasting the sky of happiness"...you put the clincher in just the right place...great writing :)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/25/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen for your visit and your gracious comment! Life is teaching us many things!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 11:08:00 AM
    - A very deep work, feel your pain and longing in this poem Demetrios - Accomplished! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 5/24/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dear A-L! How nice your visit is! Thank you for your comment and your wishes. The same to you! oxox
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Great emotive and expressive work..I can feel the love and the pain..Sara

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/24/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara! Very nice to hear from you!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:01:00 AM
    This is a phenomenal write, I really enjoyed reading this implications behind your awesome words this morning! You have delighted me by the wonderment of this poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, an awesome way to look into a bad memory in ones life...I've got my share of overcast days in my heart like anyone else! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 5:50:00 AM
    Oh! can relate here---love this--Elai

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/24/2013 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Who could not my dear? Thank you Elai, so gracious of you!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:43:00 AM
    Hi , nice on e Demetrios. xx

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    Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy! You so kind!