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The Sacrificial Lamb

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The Sacrificial Lamb

Dependable Defender Jesus Christ of Nazareth Football Club

This morning lost His appeal for the red card He received

During His side game with the highly rated Pharisees

He’ll therefore be unavailable for their match against the Sadducees


He was sent off by referee Pontius Pilate

For a massacre on Principalities and Powers

The Club failed to have the decision overturned by the Jurisdiction

He is therefore sentenced to death by crucifixion


The ‘Special One’ is to make no comment on the decision

After Herod Disciplinary Committee dismissed the club’s appeal

Jesus has offered Himself as a sacrificial lamb for a collective guilt

On the club’s recent sloppiness and wilt


The stalwart defender’s Penalty

Will begin with a physical torture

Followed by carrying a heavy rugged cross

Is the Disciplinary Committee right? Make your gloss


GLOSSES FOR JESUS THE SACRIFICIAL LAMB:

Lucas writes, March 28th…2:17

A typical Herod Decision!

I think the decision needs a Revision!


 Chris writes, March 28th….2:19

Oh! JC What a wish!

One rule for the rich!

One rule for the poor!

Herod is a force majeure!


Sir Billy writes, March 28th….3:15

Corrupt official! Corrupt leader

All they care is 30 pieces of silver


Major Buckley writes, March 28th…3:17

HE CAN’T GO AWAY WITH IT!

CRUCIFY HIM! CRUCIFY HIM! I submit


Janet writes, March 28th…..4:17

Oh NO! This looks like a JOKE!

Oh my God what a YOKE!


Wolf writes, March 28th….5:15

The blame must lay with McCarthy and McCoy

Surely it’s their fault not Jesus. Sorry boy!


Frank writes,March 28th….. 6:17

You’re an idiot’s wolf!

This Jesus should go play golf!

Crucify Him sir! Crucify Him! I rest my case


Melvin writes, March 28th…7:17

I think they can’t rescind many of the red cards

Because it would highlights the refs as nothing but land guards


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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 3:41:00 AM

    u're just very creative

    FOLI Avatar GIDEON FOLI Date: 6/22/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Prince! Keep on inspiring.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:32:00 PM

    Your writing is interesting and brilliant... xox~ Linda

    FOLI Avatar GIDEON FOLI Date: 6/15/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =) Linda