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Senryu 1

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Senryu 1

I missed the meatball
rolling off the table edge -
the dog didn't

May 23, 2013 for Susan's Contest

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Congratulations Craig ...still smiling over that dog...

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:52:00 PM
    hahaha, I would have put this one in top three!!! Congrats, Craig.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Craig (LOL) congratulations on your clever Senryu. A well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Craig, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:35:00 PM
    lol, Craig, I guess we both missed something, this is excellent, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 3:28:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:14:00 AM
    I still love this one so much (I would have placed higher!) :)_

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Craig xx

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Nice senryu, it's like doodling. Congrats on your win. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:55:00 PM
    LOL, love this one, Craig. congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Of course the dog wouldn't. Ours waits patiently at our table for such an event :) Great Senryu

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:29:00 PM
    ha! made me laugh...

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Good one!!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:08:00 PM
    yipers!... i like the progression of this scene.. it's swimming in my head... great stuff, great senryu..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Thanks that crazy song is stuck in my head! Haha I needed that today...:-) loved this a lot! And Spookie is better today.....:-) awake!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:38:00 AM love it, good one Craig! - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Yay!!! This is too fun !!! Great senryu !!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:53:00 AM
    GOOD one!!!