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Daydreaming at the Pizzeria

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Daydreaming at the Pizzeria

She said it so matter-o-factly,
that girl, Morgan Kay Ackley.
"One day it will be so
I'll be rolling in the dough!"
But being a pizza maker what do you mean exactly?



NOTE: This was another funny story at work. Not exactly my joke, but I turned into a limerick for laughter's sake. A girl was telling me about how she's be famous one day... how she'll be "rolling in the dough"... and I was like, "aren't you doing that already?"... Ooohh good times they were... good times.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Now I have an image in my mind of a girl rolling in the pizza dough, too funny...great limerick! Hugs

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/26/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cecilia... I'm getting really hooked on these limericks... a lot of fun!
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Now that made me smile!!!!!!!! Well done

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/25/2013 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy to make you smile... :)
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Your pun was fun! ;) Ok...that was cheesy, but we are talking about pizza, right? BTW...Italian cuisine...my fav! ;) Good one, my dear!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/24/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cheesy... ha! Thanks for your contribution to the punniness ;)
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Art imitates life. Love the playfulness and humor. Never thought of 'rolling in the dough' this way before... cute!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy you could see the pun... thanks as always :)
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Your a hoot! Great one!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna! :)
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:56:00 PM
    This is funny! I checked out your keyboard playing I like the destiny one a little more lively. I would have pegged you for more rock and roll. These lend more to a zen experience. What's with the big stick in the corner? To beat off all the adoring fans?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/24/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Australian aboriginal.
    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! It's actually not a stick, but an instrument called a didgeridoo. It basically sounds like a foghorn (if you don't know how to play it right)... if you DO know how to play it, it will sound very African.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:34:00 PM
    very funny and wonderfully executed!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ilene!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:01:00 PM
    Thanks for the comments guys... sometimes life is a poem all it's own... :)

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:14:00 AM
    :)) - FUN, FUN and well done Timothy!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always Anne Lise.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:08:00 AM
    it's fun to use real experiences in limericks. Be looking for more of them, my friend.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed it is! Thanks for the comments, Andrea.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:43:00 AM
    lol love it...

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sasha...
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 5:29:00 AM
    HA HA LOL, your description of the poem explained the poem even more, I understood it better after I read your explanation! This Limerick is quite humorous my friend, I really loved reading it this morning! What a delightful piece, quite the lovely poem of excellence, Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you get a laugh... thanks Russell.