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WHO AM I

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WHO AM I

WHO AM I


Am I
Part of the eternal, trapped within
The temporal
Or
Am I
The temporal, fighting part of 
The eternal to become?  


© Demetrios Trifiatis
     23  MAY 2013

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:28:00 PM

    I think it's the second one. Whatever it is - you are a child of God that was sent here to bring joy to others..... Smile God loves you and we do too..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:45:00 PM

    I liked that very much, truly I think the later is mot definitely the one. thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 11:19:00 AM

    I believe we are the temporal. Comes the answer from within my soul. :o)

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 5:20:00 PM

    You are a very phylisophical man Demetrios ..I think it would be a pleasure to know you in person...nice write...

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/24/2013 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for your comment! Do not worry there is no-one to be upset, for we all friends!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/23/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Of course I mean as poet friends...don't want to upset anybody...
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:21:00 AM

    - A good question, Demetrios. - Who can answer? - What I know is, that you are talented and a nice friend. - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/23/2013 3:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your wise answer and thank you for considering me a nice friend! Have a wonderful day yourself! xox SORRY for mixing Eileen and you! It was ...I do not know what!
    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/23/2013 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much my dear Eileen! You must already know where I stand! However, give everyone the opportunity to place him/herself accordingly!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:58:00 AM

    If I may humbly say....I believe we are the temporal, who have been privileged to house the eternal by invitation. The temple of the Holy Spirit...who as a good gentleman will not force entrance, but comes at our bidding. Lovely poem...full of depth and meaning. What do you espouse, my dear esteemed poet?

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/23/2013 3:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much my dear Eileen! You must already know where I stand! However, give everyone the opportunity to place him/herself accordingly!