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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:02:00 AM
    A melodious poem here!Good to know this new form of poertry.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Oh, this one is dreamy... LOVE the ruffled lips... I can barely read, my eyes are blurring... long day. :D Back to you, this is sure to place way up there, it has it all... language, orginality, light sensuality... a sigh maker. Hugs to you sweet chum... hoping your allergies are improving... hugs and love sent, Cyndi

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Stunningly vibrant and beautiful, as always Miss Nette. Not surprised to find you still penning wonderful poetry. Glad to see it.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
    This just shows how incurable of a romantic you really are my friend, such a lovely poem this write truly is my friend! I am in awe of the splendor of this piece Nette, you have delivered a powerful and inspiring write, I loved reading this delightful poem this evening, Great Work!!

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    Date: 5/22/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Is this form like the Quatern? I like this form, it isn't as easy as it looks, I have done a few Quaterns in my time! You have expertly done this form, the Empat...I will look to try it now!
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 6:12:00 PM
    I don't believe it is possible for you to write a bad poem, they all turn out like this one, Spectacular, I much enjoyed it, xxxx

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Astounding flow & energy from this. Playing towards heartstrings' content...

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:12:00 PM
    I love the feel of this one, it almost feels medieval, not so much Malasian. I also wanted to thank you for your comment, it really touched me. I can feel you are a very warm and spiritual person. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Introduction to a new form..Interesting work..Reads like a winner in the contest to me..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:47:00 PM
    - Adorable ..... Who can avoid getting romantic thoughts after reading this .... - Luck in contest !!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:31:00 PM
    You never cease to amaze my friend...I just copy/pasted this so I can study your rhyme scheme...You got a winner here! - Tim