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Sitting On A Wall

Richard Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux - LIFETIME Premium Member Richard Lamoureux - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Sitting On A Wall

Sitting on a wall, his special gift
The winds of change began to shift
He asked her to join him for a walk
To enjoy the day and have a talk
Earlier that day she had been miffed

What could he do to remove the rift
He desired to give her heart a lift
There his diamond ring placed on a rock
Sitting on a wall

Her reaction was happy and swift
With unbridled passion he was kissed
Happily received a heart in shock
He gently removes her flowing smock
With loves key he opens up her lock
Sitting on a wall

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  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Aww, I loved this! I'm a total romantic at heart, and this really touched me. So cute!!! I can just imagine the girls face. :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/24/2013 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visits today.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Well I can't sing for sure... but I have made some piano songs if you are interesting... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPiDZSi0Wf0

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Interested*... I type too fast and make spelling mistakes... lol.
    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think I was 15 in this video... need to make another youtube account so I can post more...
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:34:00 PM
    I thought you'd enjoy it :) I randomly stumbled upon it when I was looking up a video that me and my friend did... I typed in Tim Hicks and this random country song popped up...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thought maybe you had some hidden musical talent.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:14:00 PM
    No the artist wasn't me (quite ironically his name is just Tim Hicks). The song is called Stronger Beer by Tim Hicks... should be able to work on youtube... if not then I'm not sure what to say *shrugs*

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Don't loose them nuts... LOL!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Stronger beer and bigger balls! Very often they are bluer because it is also colder here. As a tribute to our blue balls they came out with Labbats Blue! Thanks for directing me to the video, it was a lot of fun.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:21:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Love it Richard--did you mean kist or kissed--2nd line 3rd stanza

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Reformed word to match rhyme ( poetic licence)
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:19:00 AM
    Rondeau is a beautiful style. but must be hard to keep strictly to two rhymes through out. Very nice poem. I like your choice in last two lines. "He gently removes her flowing smock With loves key he opens up her lock" Bless you!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I found this form very challenging because of the rhyme theme. I should have chose words that had more rhyming options.
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:40:00 PM
    This is cool and different... there was something very introspective about the repeated phrase... left it really open.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Tim, it was a hard one for me but I do enjoy a challenge
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 2:31:00 PM
    oh, with love keys!! a cute and clever poem!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/23/2013 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;0) thanks.