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Fantastical Unicorn Flight

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Fantastical Unicorn Flight

Creature of mystical powers
please will you give me an answer

May i please ride with you tonight 
 through  dark skies of sparkling starlight

I long to join you in your flight
you pause allow me to alight

We race through the  dazzling skies
I grip very tight with shaking thighs 

Looking around me so full of wonder
thinking nothing could  be greater

Then flying down I hug you tight
let you return to twilight

contest Any New Poet written 05/22/2013

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  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:34:00 PM
    Shadow What a charming and creative write. You kept the readers attention on these beautiful and wonderous creatures. Nice job Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Horsie poem.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/5/2014 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Robin unicorn are special Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Congratulations Shadow Love your mystical unicorn ride. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:25:00 PM
    Congratulations Shadow...:-)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/24/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    tnx Donna congrats to you as well seeing you in results Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:47:00 AM
    This is enchanting & a beautiful piece, shadow, congratulations on your win!!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/23/2013 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty so much Cherie delighted you like it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:06:00 PM
    i love this poem!! Unicorns are amazing creatures!!! I adore them!! Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:20:00 AM
    Lovely...full of magic. :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 9:46:00 PM
    dang, now I wish more than ever I'd written of unicorns, seeing how well you love them here!!! Congrats to you, Shadow!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/21/2013 3:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nature Andrea that's my love and all the fantastical myth creatures and fairies lol ty dear Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:34:00 PM
    So nice to see your name at the top of the list. You should be very proud, Linda has a good eye for talent. Hugs Rick

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/20/2013 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Rick and Ty for your encouragement and inspiration I am humbled by the response to my work. Linda has held out a hand of friendship from day 1 a great lady and poetess Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Shadow congratulation on your excellent win. If I've not personally welcomed you- WELCOME. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/20/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww Ty Connie much appreciated and ty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:38:00 PM
    Hello Linda, ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/20/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ps Ty for running contest Shadow x
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/20/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Linda will do and ty for my place much appreciated Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Excellent whimsical poem Linda, you make me wish to go along.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/30/2013 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Sheri it would be so wonderful to actually see yet alone ride one. My favourite mythical animal. Appreciate your comments Linda
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:37:00 PM
    beautiful~ SKAT ~

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/25/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciated ty Linda
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Good morning Linda, my first poem of the day... and it's about the unicorns i love so much... how i wish i could ride one.. May be i have in a lost dream... this has been an exciting poem to read... and back to the skies that light up the sky at night... adding this poem to my favorite list.... Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Linda I always think there's just a veil that stops us from seeing them. glad you like it Linda
    St.Cross Avatar Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 5/22/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ..........................."OR MAYBE IT'S JUST YOU BABY, THAT MAKES ME SOOO HORNY ? MY LOVE, FOREVER, RACHEL *