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Powdery Blanket

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Powdery Blanket

The soft powdery blanket coats
Some of Georgia's tall Pines
Whose outstretched arms reach to the sky
Offer prayer's few lines

This a backdrop to Pale Pink Rose
Who 'pon trellis still grows  
Her many blossoms now open
She puts on her spring's show

She has reached out to strong pear
Kissed and entwined branches
If allowed to continue hold
Pear will give death chances


Finis'
The Pale Pink Running Rose
has reached out and grabbed
the Pear Tree and running up it...

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:15:00 AM
    Very very good, became a fave. Gutsy even smooth combination of words and images - and grammatically daring lasts stanza. Loved it. :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Ah the flowers of spring. You capture them well in your poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Nette has said well. It's gorgeous poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:03:00 AM
    my, sara...i read as if i were gazing through your poetic eyes... a gorgeous read; can;t wait to relish its final form... well done!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:33:00 AM
    A nice beginning to a seemingly scintillating poem. I am in line to read the final copy.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Oh I absolutely love this write, I hope you finish this poem soon because I really want to read the finished product, this is very good my friend! You have painted a beautiful painting by your perfect words here, what a spectacular piece, Great Work!!