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smile of an angel - senryu contest

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smile of an angel - senryu contest

smile of an angel
sending hearts into love mode...
beware temptress. 

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:40:00 PM
    take much from this inspiring write well done

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/29/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Hmm, inspirational--love it!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/23/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Craig ....Seren
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:13:00 AM
    A remake of Adam & Eve, only the "apple" is more threatening. I dig this.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/21/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Drake, thanks for stopping by ....Seren
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Would this be cupid that's doing all of this? A temptress could definitely be formed by cupid I believe...he's a clever and mischievous angel! Or is he an angel...hmmm, I don't know, maybe this senryu could be about a simple angel, or an arch-angel! The love created from one of these angels might not be what you desire, like you said...it could be just a temptress that would be formed! What a tremendous piece Seren, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/21/2013 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren