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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:33:00 PM
    awe... Me and you both Yasmin... I wish this world came with a warning, watch out for the bumpy ride, nothing is perfect... Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Touching write here Yasmin.Very nice Senryu.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:46:00 PM
    in praise of a sullen yet beauitful work, yas... the flow of the theme brings the mood all the way to the last word,mareey... grrrreat job!...wishing you the best with hugggs.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Started off so happy then wham, sadness creeps in with a bruised soul! Very powerful message my friend, I loved each and every line of this incredible poem! Masterfully done Yasmin, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:46:00 AM
    sad but so good xx

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:37:00 AM
    - Sad, my dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)