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WEIGHTY SENRYU

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WEIGHTY SENRYU

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 9:48:00 AM
    A great senryu, indeed! There is much seriousness behind the apparent comic presentation...a lot of food for thought!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Got a chuckle..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:00:00 AM
    Kudos Rick, big smiles here!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:46:00 PM
    LOVED it the first time. CONGRATS, RIck.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:04:00 PM
    Oh love it Rick!!!! Congratulations

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Oh love it Rick!!!! Congratulations

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 1:31:00 AM
    :) Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:38:00 PM
    a great senryu, Rick.. congrats in Susan's contest...Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Cute, congratulations on your win, this is one we can all relate to

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Cool!!!...Yesir, this senryu DEFINITELY carries a lot of weight...Thanks for the laugh and congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 1:17:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Rick

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:06:00 AM
    What a clever play on words!! Great job!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place, love it Rick xx

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Oh this is funny, if only they were foolproof. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:51:00 PM
    GREAT word play!!!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:16:00 AM
    lol. Good one, Rick. :-)