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Melancholy Memory

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Melancholy Memory

White is her color
Freckles dotting pale skin
of a young teenager
Big sister

White is the collar
topping her blue dress that
matches sleeping eyes of
my sister

White is youth’s color
she said once when I cried
to be like her    be the
big sister

White are fresh flowers
daisies and carnations
Roses never suited
my sister

White is her casket
Color of purity
Angels gently enfold
my sister

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Hi Monterey, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Monterey, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:20:00 AM

    heart-wrenching and sad ending...makes me truly cry for a number of moments here...your sister, she'll be waiting beyond this veil of mortality for an eternal sweet reunion one day...with all my heart,,wendy

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:19:00 AM

    This one breaks my heart especialy in light of your other poem. Your poem is also beautiful as is your heart.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Now I have returned to the very first poem of yours I ever read. Still one of my faves!!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 3:17:00 AM

    very very nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Wonderful melancholy, this poem certainly tugs on the heart strings, the poem did sister proud, Bravo :)

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:06:00 PM

    I rejoice in your win, but am greatly saddened by your poem.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Oh my, I'm so sad, and sorry to hear this, but this is beautifully said. :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:38:00 AM

    You deserved to win with this fine, albeit sad, entry. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Monterey, a nice winning poem. *Congratulations in Constance "Melancholy Memory" contest. always~ LINDA

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 6/8/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, my sister was the form of the poem, I just filled in the words
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Very sad. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 6/5/2013 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:58:00 PM

    Beautifully written and very touching.Loved it.

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 6/1/2013 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. My sister made the poem beautiful, I just filled in the blanks
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:27:00 PM

    Wow. My heart is so moved by this. What a heart wrenching piece. Thank you!

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 6/1/2013 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm so glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:13:00 AM

    wow, Montery, for a first poem I've read of yours, I REALLY like this a lot. I love how you kept the theme of white going through it . Very well developed poetry. A FAVE, best one I saw so far tonight.

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:43:00 PM

    Beautiful written! I didn't know her, but I feel like I did with all the references to white. It's very well crafted writing... I'm only sorry for the inspiration. I'm sure she would love this tribute you wrote for her!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:10:00 AM

    That's a lovely and heartfelt memory of your sister,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich