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The Sunburned Girl

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The Sunburned Girl

The sunburned girl smiles
Patches of warm memories
Some pain hurts so good.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Creative winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:58:00 PM
    I really relate to this one, being someone who burns easily but who adores the sun. LOVE this. Congrats on the winner's list.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 PM
    Melani, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:42:00 PM
    lol, Melani, so true about the sunburn pain and fun, good write, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 3:45:00 PM
    Congratulations. Rick

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Melani xx