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The Lovers

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The Lovers

They came together in passion
their love was without ration
it was so full of loving tension

Their love was one in a million
they shared only one vision
they came together in passion

They walked together in union
as if they had taken a potion
it was so full of loving tension

Dreams shared without ration
together they shared a pillow
they came together in passion

No bars here, just love's prison
their love they did not question
it was so full of loving tension

They shared just one notion
to always love with no ration
they came together in passion
it was so full of loving tension

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written 05/19/2013

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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 7:24:00 AM

    I missed this one before, I will answer your question by soup.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:03:00 AM

    - Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Shadow. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/11/2013 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Anne Lise Ty i am happy you enjoyed Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Shadow, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/11/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ty Linda its one of my own favs so very pls enjoy the rest of sunday Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 10:52:00 AM

    Awesome write! I am discovering the villanelle and love them. Truly enjoyed your work!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/7/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Andrea and ty its an exacting form to write in I enjoy using it. Gl with it shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Lovely poem dear Linda,I think I read this one from you already.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/7/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes you have dearest friend was one of my early posts on here ty for reading again love Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:13:00 PM

    Linda, again you write a winner, congrats...Seren

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/26/2013 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Seren ty I appreciate your feedback Linda
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Congrats Linda on your winning poem, I really enjoyed it.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/25/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty very much Seosamh nice to know you liked it Linda
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 11:20:00 PM

    Hi Linda, that was a great poem# I like the first two-lines of the last stanza# Big congrats on your top win. xx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/25/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Chuma I see what you mean now if only the other 15 were as good ty much appreciated Linda
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:12:00 PM

    Enjoyed this love poem. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/25/2013 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Connie hi ty happy you enjoyed it tnx for congrats Linda
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/24/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Debbie much appreciated happy you enjoyed Linda
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:23:00 PM

    congrats on your well deserved win.take care

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/24/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Colleen much appreciated ty you too
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:33:00 PM

    wow Linda, you are amazing, new and already a new favorite poet. I am happy to see another one of your poems hit a number #1.... Congratulations... xox~ Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/24/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Linda nah just me I seem to think slightly out of the box lol luck people seem to like it ty for your continued support Linda
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:14:00 PM

    Big heartfelt congratulations on your SUPER WIN on this incredibly beautiful & romantic write my dear friend Linda! I enjoyed reading your poem! Thank you so much for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/24/2013 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty for reading I am very happy you enjoyed it ty Linda
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:59:00 PM

    congrats on your top win with this wonderful villanelle Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/24/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Joseph I was surprised I am new to villanelles Linda
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:54:00 PM

    Lovely villanelle, lovely win.Congratulations

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/23/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty it was my first attempt at this style the parrots is my 2nd so glad its liked
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:46:00 PM

    Congrats on your win - JH

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/23/2013 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi JH ty you kindly much appreciated Linda
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:35:00 PM

    Congratulations on this unique twist to the contest!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/23/2013 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Carrie ty I was amazed I won Linda
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Loved the flow and the content of your poem Linda. Congrats on winning my contest. Kim

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/23/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Kim wow I wasn't expecting that ty so much that was the 1st villanelle I wrote and to win is incredible ty Linda
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:34:00 PM

    Linda, love and it's many themes. love one in a million... enjoyed~ Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/23/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Linda amazed it won