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Kiss Mark of the Sun


When the sun sets and says its sweet goodbye,
It leaves an immense kiss mark on the sky,
A promise that it’ll return tomorrow,
To take away all our fears and sorrow.

Its kiss mark is dappled with lavender,
Birds hover above  to feel its wonder,
The silhouettes of mountains and the trees,
An art of prosperity, joy and peace.

Its kiss mark is in hue of pink and red,
A fiery love of God sent with roses,
Feel its tranquility and its warmness,
Panacea on worries that come ahead.

Crimson sky is the kiss mark of the sun,
A dazzling beauty since the world  begun.

May 19, 2013


First Place
Contest: Crimson Sky
Judged: 5/19/2013
Sponsor: Poet Skat

First Place
Contest: Your Best 2013
Judged: 1/7/14
Sponsor: My loving greatest poet, PD

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  1. Date: 2/17/2014 9:40:00 AM

    A beauty mark from the sun... SKAT

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 12:46:00 PM

    Congrats on the nice poem and win, Leonora! G.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:10:00 AM

    wow....wow...WOW.....LINDA

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:09:00 AM

    Hello my sweetest sis, I'm here finishing my contest... WOW, I have forgotten about this one.. All I know I was impressed, and immediately gave it a #1... I'm going to mark this one as a favorite poem again. Loving everything about the poem, the best imagery when spinning on world thoughts. , thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:05:00 AM

    Hi Leonora brilliant words, all we get is rain at the moment so this helped me remeber what its likes when that sun sets, good luck in the contest, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:03:00 PM

    I see this on the Top 100 Most Recent Poems this week. A Pleasure to read again and going in my faves

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Leo, stopping in to say good night and enjoy this remarkable kiss of rays one more time. The kiss of the sun over glory. a neat pink and red sky. The song of a sweet goodbye into the lovely night. you are wonderful, and thank you for the lovely comments... always and forever... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:24:00 PM

    It's around 8 pm here. I wish it was morning already. I'm tired, but i think i handle another hour or 2. maybe you can pass me some of your new and fresh energy this morning... I am working on a poem for your contest. I hope i don't miss your contest. I am glad you added a few more entries. I will work on it tomorrow after work. nice seeing you here today... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:42:00 PM

    gliding oh so tenderly, leonora... you are sun-kissed wordsmith... you make this piece sing!... hope to see you soon!.. ;) huggs

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:56:00 AM

    Excellent beauty imaged. Last lines depicts clearly. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:39:00 PM

    Truely one of the most beautiful poems I have had the pleasure to read..."kiss mark of the sun"fantastic imagery and captivating from beginning to end. :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:49:00 PM

    this is lovely. congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:36:00 AM

    The only word I would change is warmness to warmth but apart from that you have a great talent and should embrace it with both hands and get great comfort from it.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:43:00 AM

    - S-mail.... <3 <3 <3

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:56:00 PM

    Hi Leo, stopping by to say hi, and thanks for all the nice text... you are the best.. Hoping things go back to normal tomorrow... Good night sis... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:40:00 PM

    This is a lovely sonnet, Leonora. Thank you for your nice comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:37:00 PM

    Very lovely sonnet, Leonora. and belated congratulations for your fine win with this one.-Red

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Nice metaphorical descriptiveness in this work. Good one as usual.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:14:00 PM

    Amazing poem here! I just love those bright red sunsets. ~ Thank you very much for reading and commenting on so many of my poems. Your last one was so nice to hear.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:36:00 PM

    nice

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:53:00 PM

    what a sweet picture this is, Leonora. A catchy title and a lovely sonnet you have created.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Hi Sweet Leo, i fell in love with your poem, the first time I read the poem.. I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Beautiful sonnet Leo love xx

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Beautifully done sonnet Leonora...Love your idea of the sun leaving a 'kiss mark' on the heavens...Congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Leonora! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:30:00 AM

    yesss!... super congrats on your shining win.. you put us pinoys right on the mark, leonota!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:23:00 PM

    CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:59:00 PM

    A very beautiful sonnet, Leo sending hugs to you. you painted a very beautiful picture for this contest. it dazzles, and i like the color pink in this imagery... Good luck in the contest with your awesome poem.. luv luv ~Linda

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:55:00 AM

    - Yes, stunning.... - Leonora, you have written a first class sonnet !!!- Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Stunning. Absolutely stunning. We all need to embrace the vibe from this piece into the real world.

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