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Death Of Love Part 2

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Death Of Love Part 2

           ~Erase My Sufferings Out Of Love~

Reaching the stage in my life when the death of my
spirit and soul took place allowing me to live in 
pain without him, 
the love of my life.
I will preserve my capacity to hold tight to fight back, 
regain that love which would erase,
my sufferings.

Reaching the stage today
to convince myself how to nourish my soul,
enrich my goals by becoming understandable,
surface with my reasonings that are assured 
without draining my meditations.
I will feel strong and in the mood to dance to the 
tune with him,
starting now.

Allowing time to separate myself from a past lived,  
acknowledge the will to envision everyday as a new today,
still in love. 

One day I asked myself, where did my stamina 
disappear when I was young, 
wise, patient, forgiving, lovable, alive independent, a fighter, 
and in love with each second I was awake.
Those descriptive expressions, reminded me how 
I was passionate while growing up, today 
I will definitely adapt the same passion of 
yesterday`s to my tomorrow`s,
with him.

Today I am in a position to stimulate my ego,
to omit my negativeness, which was the main
reason of him closing the door, and running away.
That is a past, as from now, my 
determination is ready
to welcome him.

Reaching the stage of being in the mood 
to begin embracing my fight, and hold tight 
for another tomorrow, dream to be faithful 
towards the numerous values I wrote,
about love
in my poems. 

My conscious today denied my thoughts
to feel any pain constantly, as I found 
out it was driven due to allowing myself to 
suffer, without admitting that erasing his love 
from my life, would be replaced by my 
loneliness.  

Reaching the stage now is overdue to end that rage, 
yet In reality at that period I wanted to feel empty, 
just to denude my whole body and thoughts, live numb for 
a while, but that was in the past.

I feel blessed to have a new awakening full of hope, 
seeing him lying next to me in the late evening, 
while the moonlight enlightens our body, 
to embrace perpetually.                                                                            

                                                                                   Death Of Love Part 1
Therese Bacha                                                                  5 Minute Poem
17/5/2013                                                                       Therese Bacha       Contest for Russell Sivey; Complete My Poem. Part 2                 Win No. 1                                                                     
                                                                                           12/5/2013

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:57:00 PM
    A very in depth soulful write congratulations on your win Therese, xxx

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/19/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Rose, thank you for passing by. I had no time to see who won to. I was not ok lately. Terry
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Hi Terry, CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/19/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much , its so nice of you to drop by. Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Congratulations om finishing your poem so winningly. Love, Joyce

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning, thank you so much for thinking of me. Terry xo
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Therese this a heartfelt and honest of emotions. A wonderful win, Congratulations. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HI, Thank you so much for passing by. Have a great day. Terry
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 8:23:00 AM
    Nice poem, full of reflection and mixed emotions.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/25/2013 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Christine. Glad you passed by. Terry xo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:22:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit to say congrats..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, thank you my friend for passing by. I am so happy you are winning in the contests. love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Terry, you completed it beautifully!!! You must tell me more about this poem and its deep meaning for you. Luv,Andrea

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dearest Andrea, I will one day i promise. Love Terry xoxo Thank you for passing by.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 1:29:00 PM
    From me 7 is definite. Very deep sorrowful love poem. God is guiding you through out. Marvelous verse.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Manel, its so nice to see your smile in your picture, and to pass by, i do appreciate the 7..and your friendship. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Dear Terry, the immensity of your soul could and has overcome any challenge life has to offer! Your poem, a fantastic testimony of the human spirit and determination! You a winner and love has you embraced! Wonderfully written! 7!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Best friend Demetrios, as usual, your sharing gives me a lot of confidence each time you read one of my poems, due to the trust I have towards you. Thank you for the 7... so much appreciated. See you soon. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:55:00 AM
    - I think you are a very strong lady Terry, experienced pain, grief, suffering and love. - Life has taught you much. Hope that your smile can come back - A very well written poem, touch my heart! - Good luck in the contest! - Wish you all the best. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, whoa reading your sharing this morning brought tears to my eyes, you are so faithful and honest and sincere to me since i came to sharing my poems with poetrysoup, you never let me down, thank you so much Anne, i really do appreciate your friendship. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Excellent quill. I'll go check the part 1. AO

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/19/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks AO, i like better this picture young man. Love T.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:29:00 AM
    What a multi-layered piece that definitely expands your first write in a most lyrical, powerful way... well done!..:)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/19/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello young lady, you are my first visiter with an amazing compliment. Thank you so much. Love T.