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Haiku 50

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Haiku 50

	
	
	
	gray Saturday   
	my spirits match clouds 	
	reflected in puddles 



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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:13:00 PM
    this one looks familiar to me but I don't have a comment down here. I sure am enjoying your haiku.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Well I suppose you can at least say the puddles are clean enough to have reflections! Weather really does to affect ones mood dramatically... sub-conscience or not, it happens. Don't hate me for saying this for it's a very nit-picky thing... the "my" in the first line looks strange where it is... visually it'd look better in the middle (in my humble opinion). You can leave it as is just fine... but I always strive to be as honest as possible in my comments.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/23/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're right. I'll change it. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks... Jack
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Sorry for all the rain, that would bring anyone's spirits down. The sun will shine upon you soon.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/19/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is doing so as I type this. Thanks for reading, Richard.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 11:51:00 PM
    Another huge image created in a few short words. Reminiscent of Oregon. Well done.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/19/2013 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Karen. Saturday did indeed turn out to be dark and stormy... Jack
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:23:00 PM
    awe... a little gloomy... but an awesome haiku... perfect for any rainy day... Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/18/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The weather prediction here is for days of rain with the occasional tornado, so gloom will continue for a while longer. Thanks for the comment... Jack
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Nice captured my day here perfectly. Nice write.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/18/2013 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks... As you can tell, rainy days are not my favorites. Jack
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 6:46:00 AM
    Yeah..gray here too on the porch swing..but the birds are singing...have a nice day Jack...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/18/2013 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The same to you. Enjoy your weekend. I'm looking at tornadoes. Fun...