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Melancholy Mood, Last Less

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Below is the poem entitled Melancholy Mood, Last Less which was written by poet Abdulhafeez Oyewole. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Melancholy Mood, Last Less

Those pitiless days ’re enough to puzzle the compassionate mind.
A phenomenal gesture, soon sued to have downplayed the legit,
That even the impartial impact was bandit with words.
Not so funny ’re those days
That devils 're clad in bigotry .
And soon ready enough 
To poison soups 
Meant for the entourage.
Pitiful quill perhaps has taken over this weakening wit.
Now struggles continue.
Exclusive parcels to all the greenery gestures.
Your compassionate touch is well noted
And well felt.
Thank you so much for the deliverance.

Penned by:
Abdulhafeez Oyewole

18/5/2013

Previous contested poem title: 5 Minutes Challenge

For: Russell Sivey's "Complete Your Poem" Contest.

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Abdulhafeez, CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:03:00 AM
    I am glad to see you got it completed. It ended up quite nice, my friend.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:38:00 PM
    OOO WOW... NOT THAT'S A GOOD THEME FOR A PART 2 CONTEST... OA... I enjoyed how you finished the 5 minute poem... xox~ PD

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 7:03:00 PM
    Hi A.O did you not enter this one in the contest??? It is very good and I don't remember reading it till now.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:48:00 PM
    O my goodness........this is remarkable. You have written an outstanding poem....worth reading more than once! Excellent!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Your poetry is growing by leaps and bounds, Abdulhafeez...Thanks for the pleasure of this read and have a blessed weekend - Tim