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Sixth Sense Seduction

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Sixth Sense Seduction

SIXTH SENSE SEDUCTION

In ordinary ways
in ordinary days
I stand before her quite amazed
at her lithe form.

While reaching up to touch a cloud
with naked limbs (it’s all allowed)
Her beauty strikes though not to lure; 
to transform me of that I'm sure.

I hear the whispered wind blow through...
to once again say its adieu
...in delicate sound, so very crisp
upon this newly blossomed tryst
like falling leaves that gently touch
a waiting heart.

While still in trance of blessed bliss
I knew that a presumptive kiss
would end this convocation.

And so in silly awkward glee  
and truly thinking it was not me
I could not I resist; oh won't you see?
It was not wrong to hug that tree.

CAK 2-14-2013

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 1:00:00 PM
    LOL Tree huggers unite! lol I love it Allan.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Oh Wow, I truly love love love this one. You captured me and the final lines are so funny and I might add witty. Your poems are beautiful and I look forward to reading more and more. Lov, Shar

    Koven Avatar Allan Koven
    Date: 10/22/2013 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Shar, you are so sweet. Thank you. Allan
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:12:00 PM
    ...leaves that gently touch a waiting heart... Cerebral!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Yet another delightful piece, Allan. I see why it was featured. Trust me, I am not pandering to your poetic ego lol You can count me as a fan of your work! :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:54:00 AM
    - Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Allan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Koven Avatar Allan Koven
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    One of first I ever wrote. Seems it still resonates. Thanks for responding, Anne Lise Andresen. Great to hear from you. Allan
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Good morning Allan, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

    Koven Avatar Allan Koven
    Date: 8/11/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love hearing from you, Linda. You know how much I admire your poetry. Allan
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Nice and playful. I thought it was a very fun read.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Nice one xx

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:14:00 PM
    Allan, lovely seduction, enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Sensual yet proper, loved it xxx

    Koven Avatar Allan Koven
    Date: 5/31/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    We will think in ways that sometime belie what is truly meant. Thank you for your comment.
  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:58:00 AM
    ....this was so good. Thanks for bringing a smile to me! Z

    Koven Avatar Allan Koven
    Date: 5/31/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading. Hope to read your poetry soon. Allan