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Coherent thoughts

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Coherent thoughts

Truth could not be eclipsed,
And you said it was a joke.

There was a mystical feeling,
Behind your saying that you 
didn't care.

I could feel obscure pain 
beneath, 
And you said it was alright .

A desire was shrouded,
Once you said I should leave 
you alone.

An Imperceivable feeling was 
sensed,
And you said you didn't know.

I could feel you in disguise,
There was a silence of deep sea 
water.



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  1. Date: 9/13/2014 9:30:00 AM
    Hi Upma, An excellent write for your first offering on the soup. I don't mind telling you I was terrified when I put my first poem on. I'm still terrified yet. You put your coherent thoughts down In such an Interesting manner. You bring us Into the thoughts. Let your pen ever run gold and your thoughts flow onto the page. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 9/13/2014 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnx Michael my good friend! I never get terrified whatsoever happens in life!
  1. Date: 7/18/2014 10:04:00 PM
    I bet you could cut the tension with a knife...hugs

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 9/13/2014 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnx Tim u visited ! My first poem on soup!
  1. Date: 7/14/2014 9:08:00 AM
    Oh this has a nice feel to it for your first poem here on the soup, it is amazing to go back and see the beginning offerings. You have beautiful words and beautiful thoughts :)

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 7/14/2014 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Casarah! So nice to see u visit my very first page!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Upma, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 6/9/2013 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda !!
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:17:00 AM
    UPMA, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

    A. Sharma Avatar Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Date: 5/25/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot!!! That's too much of an encouragement !!