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Crimson sky

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Crimson sky

Crimson sky at eventide
As the sun begins to hide
 Twilight comes,  crickets croon
"Neath starry skies and golden moon

Crimson sky, a beautiful sight
Slowly blending into night
As fireflies burst with light,  they dance
Leading lovers on the  path of romance

Crimson sky paints a picturesque horizon
As daylight fades with the sun
 As the ball of fire descends and simmers
 The restless ocean begins to  shimmer

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Great work, Joseph. This is about my bedtime and your beautiful treatment of evening brings on yawns... Good night... This is better than Melatonin... See ya later.... Jake

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Hi Joesph, I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Stunning Imagery and descriptive used in this poem. Loved it-- my favorite things-- Sky at dusk, moon and Ocean.

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:21:00 PM
    CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 5/20/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for my placement in your contest Skat...
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 7:18:00 AM
    - Pleased to read your poem today Joseph, beautiful. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 5/20/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Anne...hugs