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Cinquain Eight

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Cinquain Eight

Job
left behind 
now looking forward
I stand at attention
waiting

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:48:00 AM
    Oh no... I'm sure with your skills and your faith you will find something else. Hope all is well with you!

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Poignant way of describing the unemployment line. I hope this is fictitious, Rick! You really excel in the cinquain form. I'm amazed at just how many short forms there are. Septolet is another interesting one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/16/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No it's not fiction. I left two days ago.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Sounds exciting Rick....it's all how you look at change, best of luck in your wait! I am on vacation in Disney, Flordia! Just me and my two younger boys, our first trip of many : )

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/16/2013 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's good to be at the happiest place on earth. I hope you have a blast. Your boys will never forget this Experiance.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Kind of like my hubbie starting his new business and it's scary as heck!! good one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/15/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I plan to take some time for myself to think about what I want to do.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:16:00 PM
    When a door closes...look for a window...a window of opportunity. This could be the best thing to happen. God will lead you...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/15/2013 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Looking forward to what he will come up with.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Great write. Well done! AO

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/15/2013 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks A.O
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:34:00 AM
    This is a great Cinquain addressing such a common yet unsettling topic. Thanks.. I now know the format for a Cinquain, and enjoyed the lesson through your talented write.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/15/2013 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kim