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Big bang

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This is a "lento" composition following the indications of Lencio Rodriguez.
Notice the rhymes among the first words of each line and the original structure of the lento.


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Big bang

Universe was only a little sphere
Adverse to the empty space around
Converse to expand , for self adhere
Inverse to produce light and sound.

Exploded then in a blowing sudden
Inverted quickly its very sticky nature
Expanded energy in the space fallen
Started of shiny stars the adventure.

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  1. Date: 10/1/2014 3:19:00 PM
    You take on the ambitious task of describing cosmological discoveries in verse. Very nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 10/2/2014 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Matthew, big bang is fascinating because it happened in a fraction of a second breaking the mith of relativity!
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 12:11:00 AM
    Mario, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 10/2/2014 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Linda. I am answering late because I was on vacation without internet, but I am following you and your well deserved success on this site!
  1. Date: 2/6/2014 6:06:00 PM
    I love the show The Big Bang Theory! and yep pretty much what they said happened lol

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 10/2/2014 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Kira, thank you for coming. It is a pleasure to meet you and I shall visit you soon
  1. Date: 2/4/2014 5:18:00 PM
    Yaay! So pretty

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:51:00 PM
    Congratulations, Mario.... like the slight alliteration last line... xox..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Congratulation

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:27:00 PM
    WOW... nice visuals and very creative. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Congrats on the win , Mario

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 11/9/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, but I do not know what I won, maybe a contest, but I cannot find it on the site
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Mario, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:17:00 AM
    like the topic

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 10/15/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for commenting. These verses come out from the suggestion of Lencio Rodriguez to compose a new form, the "lento" composition which has alterne rhymes and the first word of each verse rhymng with thw prwcwding every four verses.
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:53:00 AM
    It's a brief history of big Bang very nicely penned. Loved the style. Always....,bl

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:26:00 AM
    This is a very descriptive anology of our earth's beginning. Love the theme and great creativity. Excellent :)

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Nicely done. Betty

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Cool poem about that theory. I love the tv show of the same title as well!!