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An ode to another

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An ode to another

An ode to another
Sensing the rhythm you ebb and flow like a snake through my heart
Palpitations flutter soft and dense breaking the blackness apart
Electrified you shock and jolt pumping my blood to start
Thump to thump forcing the flow to a work of art
Decay and hunger fearing the light depart
Hunger and sustenance you impart
Vein to blood a counterpart
Echo to song in restart
Forever now in part
My heart to heart
It is from your heart
Hoping to become a part
Delicate dance my counterpart
Musical muse inspiration you do impart
Dreaming that the rhythms would never depart
Our elegant orchestra designs the song to a work of art
Visions enlightens the moment as the finale has begun to start
Swaying and swoon the tenderness now break the melancholy apart
Sensing the rhythm you and ebb and flow like a snake through my heart
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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 1:47:00 AM
    Wow, Love it. awesome it is. :)

    the Wordsmith Avatar Drakavai the Wordsmith
    Date: 5/15/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad you liked it. It took some time to work out the words to fit the shape of the lines :)