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Simile

MUSIC

Like the wind flying through the air
As the fire crackles out a beat
Like the waterfall crashing against rocks
like music to my ears



NOTE: I wrote this when I was about 10. Found my old poetry! So happy!

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing, short and sweet. Glad you found your old poetry.

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:10:00 AM
    You were a very talented child. Thanks for sharing with us.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/15/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! During that time that was when I started getting into poetry. Glad you liked it! :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:48:00 PM
    yes natures beauty makes for the best of calm noises, can't believe a young mind has so much wisdom, thank you for sharing, ...~luv p.d.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/15/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! That means a lot! :D
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:29:00 PM
    I'm not sure if you ever check back on responses, but I just thought I'd let you know I always respond to your comments on my work. Sometimes it just takes me awhile to get around to it...

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/15/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Timothy, I always go back on your poetry and check, hehehe! I told you, I'm a fan! :P
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:48:00 AM
    How awesome!!!!! You had it in you then. Now, moreso. I love me some waterfalls.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/14/2013 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hahaha thank you!! I love me some waterfalls too. ;)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Aww it's so fun to reminisce at the older work. You seem to have been in a really happy mood when you wrote this... that's awesome. The first thing I ever wrote was downright embarrassing (but to be fair it was a requirement for school so I didn't exactly try to make it good... haha).

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol!! I know, I can see my poetry and know how far I've come with it! Pssh, nothing beats Drunk Chicken and I LIKED it!!! Yeah, when it come to school projects we don't usually try that very hard, lol!