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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:53:00 AM
    love your made up poem, and your sweet imagination... enjoyed...

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Very Deep. I believe at some point most of us feel this way. *hugs* trust youre well :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Gripping & heart-wrenching. While this is a made-up poem, I can relate to this very much....minus the whole "feeling like a woman" bit. :)

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Very sad poem Gail, I'm glad it is fiction, hope your feeling better these days xxx

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:42:00 PM
    Wow, this is a powerful and wondrous write my friend! You have amazed me by the incredible way you broached the subject of loss, and losing someone! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this piece, Great Work!!