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  -    Punctuate a a sign, which gives the reader time to breathe. . . . . I breathe. . .





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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:16:00 AM

    love the simplicity of this. Seems like I have'nt conversed with you for a while. Is that just me ? ;} xxx's

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/7/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:51:00 AM

    I loved this! How wonderful! Yes...a pause! I use this often! :) Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 12:14:00 PM

    A breath of life you've penned! Well done AL Anderson. AO

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/17/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 11:44:00 AM

    Your style is rapid and effective. I admire synthetic poetry which allows to breathe......

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/17/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mario. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Very ineresting and great creativity... I take a sigh of relief.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:52:00 PM

    Anne so true about punctuation. Without any no sense can be made. A cleaver Senyru. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Connie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:39:00 PM

    Ah...something I do too often..pausing to think.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 1:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Donna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/15/2013 6:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great line Anne Lise:-)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 5:29:00 PM

    A breath of fresh air, Anne-Lise! Love it. Yes :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 1:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Good message. Nicely written Anne :) Always, Laura

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:18:00 PM

    Yes, sometimes in reading poetry one needs to slow down to absorb what the writer had to say..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 12:16:00 PM

    Interesting and inventive... Great! Terry

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Terry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:37:00 AM

    I love using dots... LOL... Bet you've noticed... This tickled my fancy...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:12:00 AM

    I love your senryu my dear friend Anne Lise. A brilliant idea on how you give importance to punctuation in life through your excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring and wonderful comment on my poems last night. Belated happy Mother's Day. God bless you and your family always! love lots, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 12:08:00 AM

    Very inventive! I liked the way you make the punctuation "come to life". I recall watching an audiotape that was literally all about the history of punctuation, but told in a comical way. These little observations are always fun...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:43:00 PM

    clink clunk permeates the night, is me heart a pounding right, teeth are gripping with me bite, shut up johnson say goodnight...:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Ok! I breathe with you - the sea is near, her aura is here! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Giorgio. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:14:00 PM

    What you have here is something which gives me a smile and an opportunity for a very deep breath. Thank-you for your last comment, by the way. It made me feel appreciated. I am here in Eastern Daylight Time, far away from you. However, I feel thankful for your lovely poetry. The world is wonderfully remarkable in that we can use these tools to share wonderful thoughts! Thanks.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Duke. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:12:00 PM

    I breathe with you.... lovely thought !!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Thanks God, it's a breath of Dot ...Dot...Dot. .......Excellent style of Senryu. Thanks......., loved always, b

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:46:00 AM

    Love this... what a breath of fresh air :) xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:26:00 AM

    Good one... You made me smile too. Sometimes simplicity is best... Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Always pleasant with a smile, Jack! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Was intrigued with the title... You made me smile . BG

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Always pleasant with a smile! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Barbara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:13:00 AM

    Pauses are like resting places, to allow us to gather strength on the exploration of poetry's mysteries. Well said, Anne-Lise... David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:52:00 AM

    ohhh, those pauses mark a sigh, a change, a final end to a refrain... beautiful way to make the air drift in and out of our life source, anne... BREATHLESS! ...hope mother's day went well.. :) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:34:00 AM

    so clever Anne Lise, in fact very clever,would also make a wonderful senryu....or haiku...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - I was a little unsure if it could postest under Senryu, thank you Harry. - - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:46:00 PM

    we all should ....... excellent insight dear, Anne Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Suzanne. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Very enlightening poem Anne. I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day luv. Love always, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Gail. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 4:13:00 PM

    And I breathe from reading this enlightening write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a stupendously creative piece, Great Work!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Russell. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)