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Haiku 27

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Haiku 27

blades of light cut swift
through heaven's cotton field -
igniting their dreams



NOTE: I know I don't typically go artsy-fartsy with my haiku (wax eloquent as Eileen Ghali would call it). But in this case the sky was being too beautiful to NOT go overboard with the descriptions...

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:44:00 AM

    I like it!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/14/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick... It's one I really enjoy myself...
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:33:00 AM

    - Oh .... just beautiful! - Have a nice day my friend Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/14/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You as well! You seem to check up on almost all my haiku... It makes me happy that you're such a fan! :D
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 12:57:00 AM

    Beautiful :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/14/2013 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate your visit, Sasha... stop by anytime!
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Heavens cottonfield! Awesome!!!!!!!!! This made me take a deep breath!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/14/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna! I was particularly happy when I thought of the phrase... glad you liked it!
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:38:00 AM

    BRILLIANT! I'll say it again, BRILLIANT! You continue to amaze me each day!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/13/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Jack. I know you're not much of a haiku type person, but I'm pleased you enjoy it! :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:16:00 AM

    Great imagery revealed in your poem, Timothy! You can never wax too eloquent for me.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/13/2013 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well you are very eloquent yourself, my friend! :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:38:00 AM

    I know... what an inspiration the sky and heavens can be-- lovely descriptive used here. You have put me into Haiku thinking mode :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/13/2013 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by Kim!
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:01:00 AM

    Beautiful description, easily visualized. Rick

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/13/2013 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad to hear it. As far as the more fancy haiku this is one of my favorites...
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 11:57:00 PM

    This is very beautiful..Making me visualize the view Timothy...Charma

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/13/2013 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Charmaine!
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:42:00 PM

    I'm impressed with this. Good job.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/12/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Robert... glad you liked!