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Grandma's pond

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Grandma's pond

A small pond,
nestled in the ever soft grass!
The sun glints off the surface
of this peaceful pool!
A small waterfall
cascades over the rocks,
constantly churning the water.
The breeze a soft whisper
against my face.
Small trees of pine,
stand off to one side!
The gentle gurgle of water
ever present, so peaceful and quiet!
Absolutely beautiful!

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  1. Date: 5/12/2013 2:00:00 PM

    I'm wondering why you chose the exclamation points here. They seem to not quite make sense with the quiet and peaceful theme of the poem, but you evoked a lovely scene. Good work, keep it up. -Jeremy

    the wolf Avatar Dyp the wolf Date: 5/12/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you... and i dont know i just like exclamation points! hahaha! lol! XD
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:50:00 AM

    yes, it is so beautiful. Cute avatar too!

    the wolf Avatar Dyp the wolf Date: 5/12/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you and thank you! the avatar is Dyp my fursona! and the poem is about a pond in my grandmas back yard!