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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:41:00 PM

    You stay cool Yasmin,, see you around my BFF... Have yourself a wonderful, valentines day... Hugs... tata...LINDA

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:43:00 PM

    An creative way of looking at a color. Congrats on your win, Yasmin! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:10:00 AM

    Such a unique tanka of introspection!! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:20:00 AM

    Left us with so much to think about in this poem.... Well penned.... Congrats Yasmin on this win.... xx

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:53:00 PM

    Great write to ponder...............I enjoyedi ~Congrats

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 11:05:00 AM

    stunning me no end, yas...congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:54:00 AM

    Yasmin I loved your different take on this...congratulations

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:28:00 AM

    great job, congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:24:00 AM

    Yasmin this is an excellent view of the color black congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:19:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Yasmin, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:59:00 AM

    Yasmin, your presentation of black had such a great message! Congratulations. I really enjoyed this one.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:14:00 PM

    Maybe that's why I have so many black Love IT! BG

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 1:40:00 PM

    It's for Alfred's contest...(which is closed) hey... Black is a good theme for a contest... I might try the theme next... I will go look up other contest.. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 4:40:00 AM

    Our soul, a spectrum of hues of all colors, choosing according to its ever-changing mood! Magnificently optimistic!

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Nice rainbow poem here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 11:33:00 AM

    mareey, always thrilling me woth extraordinary poetry... happy mothers' day... how are you?.. love and huggs, priya!..:)

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:23:00 PM

    It takes all hues to create a true black, that is the reason she is the queen of all colors my friend! Black is a very powerful and firm color, it's very strong and intense! Your poem described all of this with grace, you so elaborately put together a delightful piece Yasmin, What a masterful poem, Great work!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:20:00 PM

    Supergreat tanka,Yas!:) And yes it does,gives strenght to new beginnings.Hope you`re well and enjoying the weekend my dear friend.Blessings from Norway;-)

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:10:00 PM

    the most unfaithful colour in the box. it will go with anything.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:05:00 PM

    Black ..... mysterious and exciting ..... Love it my friend Yasmin! - Good luck in the contest. - Have a nice Mother's Day. (Norway is Mother's Day in February) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:35:00 PM

    I love the optimistic message through the end of your tanka gives strength to New beginnings.Well done sweet lady

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:55:00 PM

    i really dont knw the diffrnc b/w white n black,,,but nw i knw...n tht''s really good to find tht evrythng iz nature.....n nature itslf signifies the purest determination of peace,,love,,& respect. ...^^kamran^^

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Wow Yasmin!A great tanka!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Always beautiful images when reading your poems Yasmin, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs