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3 Grook

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An attempt to compose funny 'Grook' poetry. Grook poems are "aphorisms". Enjoy!
 


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3 Grook

-------- 1
If you place pepperoni
inside your mouth you'll burn
your thoughts may turn to stony
you'll drink tons of sauterne.
-------- 2
You never loved me lady
I climbed tall mountains thus
your feelings turned to shady
with aliens you discuss.
--------- 3
You fell asleep while swimming
in the Olympic games
the gold you were hence dreaming,
gulping bottles of Heinz.
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© 05-11-2013 G.V.

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  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:19:00 PM
    enjoying your grooks again and also came here to say thanks for the recent win in your contest. So glad you liked that poem of mine.

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 5:11:00 PM
    these are sure interesting grooks!! For us, Heinz is a brand of catsup pronounced with a long I sound! As usual, great meter I see. Say, I chanced just now to check out contest winners and saw that you liked my jazzy cat!! thanks so much. You should meet my cat. She is SOOO sweet!!!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Interesting experiment with cute exploits, specially the first and the third one, but it is difficult to me to accept this kind of poetry. It is one of my limits.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading these today..I like the one about falling asleep swimming in the olympics..Thanks for the visits to my work..Your commenst are valuable to me..Sara

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Hi G, I like pepperoni, ha ha.. I like the humor in your grook poems. the 3rd one was my fav.. I want to thank you for all the nice and lovely visits. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA

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    Date: 5/11/2013 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I smile to you! Happy mother's day, too! Love and hugs! G.