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blue

a river of blue
meanders through morning's mood
while I sort her things

wrapped carefully in tissue
one fragile blue-willow cup
    



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for Andrea
5/10/13

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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:52:00 PM

    soupmail.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:33:00 PM

    Many congratulations on your well-deserved grand win my dear friend, Carrie! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:11:00 PM

    Congrats, Carrie, carefully written tanka. Brings memories and tears.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Wow Carrie you've outdone yourself with this. Many congrats darling!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:44:00 PM

    Brilliant!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:15:00 PM

    when I first read this I mentally noted it as a top winner, sheer perfection...congrats on a deserved 1st place :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:52:00 AM

    memorable work of art, carrie... congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:55:00 AM

    Beautiful. Congrats on your great win. Betty

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Sniff....congratulations..

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:50:00 AM

    lovely imagery Carrie, congrats on your well deserved first place win

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Ahh!!Great work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 AM

    this is beautiful. I'm glad I happened upon this piec of blue emotion. fav.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:58:00 AM

    River flows in words. Carrie a very fine Haiku. A big congratulations on your win. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 5:18:00 AM

    Warm and quietly lovely. Congratulations, Carrie. Well won.-Red

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:06:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your top spot Carrie, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:40:00 AM

    what can I say? For me, this is premier Tanka writing!!! Congrats, CArrie.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:56:00 PM

    awesome Carrie... congrats in Andrea's contest... Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:00:00 PM

    No question that this is the winner...just lovely. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Congrats on your win an excellent poem.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:07:00 PM

    It has to be lonely at the top---but you're used to it--Perfectly first!!!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Carrie this is an excellent Tanka. I love it. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:40:00 AM

    Awesome dear sweet Carrie

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:58:00 PM

    You narrowed it down to utter beauty Well done Carrie xxx

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Dear Carrie--so much said in 5 short lines--so true about meandering thoughts--love it.