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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 10:23:00 AM
    I think it is perfect for your intention and no, I got the aha before your comment--doesn't it even lean to personification?

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Oh my goodness Cyndi Lou. The subdued against the "dued" or whatever. I must say I smiled the pleased, knowing smile when I read your haiku. I didn't think beyond to the black clad oldies passing on polka dots to the young. Just the scene - so universal. Did you know I was scrolling through your poetry yesterday, waiting for more time to comment and then voila I see you at my page. Happy Mother's day - yes! love, Kathy

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Lovely Lady, Cyndi... happy mother's day...PD

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:21:00 AM
    cyndi, I got the idea fairly well. The only thing I don't like is how the first line goes on into the second one. I always like when new thought (in this case the verb minding) goes to the next line. It's sure a cute picture though!!