Below is the poem entitled Contemporary haiku which was written by poet
MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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modest black, minding
such teeny, Hawaiian prints
in the tot pool
*What I experienced today, swimming with my girl... the juxtaposition of all these mom in simple, black sheaths watching and chasing after toddlers and preschoolers in these super bright swimsuits... made me smile.
The metaphor is, obviously, intentional, and WELCOME with some mags which I''ll soon be submitting haiku.
QUESTION: Did I capture my intention. Did you SEE what I was talking about in the haiku or did you only go AHA once you read this notation? THANKS FOR ANY COMMENTS! xox