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this Sunday meadow

      airbrushed in Renoir orange

welcoming Autumn

      through glide of marmalade leaves

          ...cuddling Sabbath’s peace

Contest: Andrea Dietrich's Tanka Me A Color
10 May 13

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:26:00 AM


  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:30:00 AM

    Much more "orangier" than my attempt... the marmalade leaves description was my favorite... most creative!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:38:00 PM

    So beautiful and cool! So love it! An outstanding poem which deserved its grand win! Big heartfelt congratulations my dear friend Nette! Kudos as always! So proud of you! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Beautiful Nette. Many congrats for this great win.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 5:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this poem!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 5:45:00 PM

    A great win, Nette, and a wonderful picture you paint. Have I seen that Renoir somewhere? Congratulations.-Red

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:56:00 AM

    So beautiful. Congrats on your win. Betty

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:37:00 AM

    Cuddling Sabbath's peace almost made me cry...congratulations on this great win..

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:53:00 AM

    just lovely nette, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Colorful winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Created beautiful. 'Marmalade leaves', Gosh I love this phrase. A wonderful painting in words. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:07:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win nette, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:43:00 AM

    Nette, as someone who loves Renoir, I found the imagery here stunning. Also loved marmalade leaves. Way to BRING IT in my contest. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:59:00 PM

    this is an awesome choice of Orange, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:18:00 PM

    Your pen cannot write anything less than beautiful words! Once again......never ordinary! :) Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:08:00 PM

    Congratulations, Nette, on a fine choice of colors - the favorite of my younger son. He has more orange hats, shirts and jackets than the Syracuse Orangmen. Perfect seasonal references.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Nice one Nette..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:08:00 PM

    A true painting Nette!! Great win

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:59:00 AM

    Oh...this should do VERY well, Nette. It's beautifully done.

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:41:00 PM

    What beautiful words. "Marmalade leaves" - a very nice phrase! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:56:00 AM

    Nette...line 4 my fave in this bright write! Jimbo

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:41:00 PM

    love this tanka, Nette

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Just beautiful

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Beautiful Tanka on the colour orange! I LOVE IT!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:44:00 AM

    Hey...I am here!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:37:00 PM

    Hi Sweet Nette, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: it is a very nice colorful image for a tanka..xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Beautiful write Nette. So descriptive and sunny. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Very expressive and colorful..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed the marmalade..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Excellent Tanka on Orange. Good luck. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 2:55:00 PM

    - Another unique poem from you, Nette. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a lovely weekend, my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)