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Mondo 2

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Below is the poem entitled Mondo 2 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Mondo 2

what omnipotent
being is casting off stars,
this warm August night?

that's a silly question!
instead ask how it is I'll be getting home
with beauty like this...



NOTE: I stretched the syllables a bit, but I couldn't find any other way around it.

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:55:00 PM

    Beautiful. I had to read it a second time. I think I was reading too much into it the first time!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/12/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hope I'm not crossing into too deep of oceans for you... lol. My mind can run away with me at times... haha.
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:42:00 PM

    Timothy, like Richard, I'm not familiar with the form on your title... however, i'm not familiar with many forms... still enjoyed~ LINDA

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/10/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Linda! :)
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:16:00 PM

    Not familiar with Mondo but I did enjoy.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/10/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is an obscure form of poetry. I explained the definition of it in Mondo 1.
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 3:10:00 PM

    Awwww...such beauty we see in the heavens. Lovely write.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/10/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen! When you're in the woods, at least, it can be beautiful.
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 5:51:00 AM

    Ha ha, yeah, you might have stretched the syllable count but I enjoyed it nonetheless! You have delivered a spectacular write here with this one my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! What a magnificent piece this truly is! Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/10/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy you could work past that :) Syllables can be a tricky foe when writing these shorties...