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Red

rose pedals softly falling

tumbling, floating through the air

red buds are bursting 

sweet powerful smells flood my mind 

love has touched the air tonight

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Contest: Tanka Color
May8/13
Honorable Mention

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 5:40:00 PM

    A lovely image, Betty. Congratulations on your win.-Red

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 11:11:00 AM

    a real gem...congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:40:00 AM

    congrats on your win Betty, beautifully done

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:32:00 AM

    A beautiful image and a great last line. Congratulations Betty on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:04:00 AM

    congratulations in my contest. I like how you involved the sense of smell!! a very lovely poem

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 PM

    Betty, a beautiful poem and picture of a falling buds... CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:38:00 PM

    A lovely written poem,Betty ! - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)