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THE FACTS OF LIFE

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THE FACTS OF LIFE

When I was born
I let myself go with the journey
So that soon, I will understand
what is the true meaning of life.
I let myself grow
with the help of myself and people around me

there maybe a lot of trouble ahead,
but still, Life goes on..
I have God, family and friends
whom I can talk to when I am down and in difficulties.

I am ready to face some tasks and challenges.
I will work hard to survive 
I will gain some experiences
I will celebrate, and find more friends
I will intensify the enjoyment
create my own home, break rules
until i failed, lose, and cry.

Despite of that, i will still stand and learned from the best.
I will teach, write and shared my story
so that when the time comes that my soul leave my body,
I will be remembered
remembered by someone whom I know
and I don't even know...

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  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:26:00 AM
    Rubie, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 10:05:00 AM
    I was doing all I can to not let the 80s theme song of "Facts of Life" inundate my brain as I read this. :) That said, this was a strong piece. We all want to leave some kind of legacy for those in our hearts and those who don't know who we are. I fully understand this. Well done! Nice to meet you!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 2:13:00 AM
    thank you for the positive feedback and warm welcome, this inspires me to read some creative poems and to write more...

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Rubie, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Refreshingly truthful! Kim

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 6:21:00 AM
    Nicely written with much truth. Keep posting and welcome. Rick

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 6:21:00 AM
    Welcome, Rubie. May your journey of life be filled with much meaningful experiences. Keep on writing poems, David