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disentangled

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Below is the poem entitled disentangled which was written by poet Carrie Richards. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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disentangled

moonlight nestles

into every curve...

afterglow





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5/7/13
for Catie

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 10:10:00 AM
    this places a lovely picture in my mind Linda

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Hot, well written. Congratulations. Rick

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Carrie I too loved the powerful last line...congratulations

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:34:00 PM
    I love this too, simple but beautifully effective, and that one word in the last line says it all, congrats :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
    I just loved yours, Carrie. Congrats on the list.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:49:00 AM
    Carrie congratulations. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 3:46:00 PM
    A fabulous image in this Haiku. I just love reading this form. Great work. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 5:44:00 AM
    What a wonderful haiku... :)

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Great haiku... Best wishes in the contest~A.O

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Great haiku... Best wishes in the contest~A.O

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 9:56:00 AM
    oh my goodness. You did a short one and it's so excellent. Clever lady you!

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Very sensual---go you haiku girl!

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:34:00 PM
    A beautiful haiku, thanks for sharing this, I needed this xxx

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Carrie, Chef said to say Thank-YOU for your comment.He appreciates it. He will write You when he gets home. Respectfully Phillip

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Awesome haiku. Rick

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:49:00 AM
    wow!Great ku :)

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Thank you Carrie! - It's gorgeous! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)