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Haiku 21

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Haiku 21

the sound
of a poet's pen dropping
during the hailstorm



NOTE: Ahhh back to good ole haiku once again :)

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Keep up the haiku. I love it!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/9/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Will do :) I've written hundreds of them, but a lot of them I don't care for.
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:12:00 PM
    love reading this poem tons of times. good work, poet! Maybe... it's called Writer's Block? haha : - )

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha-ha... perhaps, perhaps! It can be read a lot of different ways I imagine. If you like haiku I've written many... it means a lot that you like it enough to read it more than once :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 8:27:00 PM
    I've left mine dropping a lot lately...great one Timothy...:-)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:49:00 PM
    Timothy, I like the sound... no time in thinking.... I tapped my pen all morning long. It's a good hailstorms stay away from this part of Texas... LINDA

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I don't know much about Texas (other than it gets a lot hotter than Idaho). I have no idea what hail would be like over there...
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:16:00 PM
    Scintillating piece.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ndaba, for the compliment :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:39:00 AM
    That hail can be a bit startling.

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 5/7/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha
    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was trying to writing about the hail and then I realized that I had no words that could accurately describe it (thus the reason why my pen dropped)...
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Wonderfully written, Tim! :DD -DWB

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit David!
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 2:50:00 AM
    A good haiku, Timothy. - Haiku is fun forms to write. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed it is... thank you!