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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Hi Caleb! You sure take us there with you for that hunt... I really like how you are very descriptive here, even including all the senses, discerning everything-- I have never hunted in my life (except for a great bargain, ha! kidding!!), so this is the closest I can get to it-- I don't even know what you are hunting here (a bear? I'm most likely wrong) so I better stop yakking here and head on to the next part...

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Can I just say again that I LOVE your writing style? You have outdone yourself again, Mr. McCaleb! I truly enjoy these little glimpses into your world. The way you describe this, it almost sounds like a type of meditation. Such extreme focus!

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Love it Caleb!!!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:20:00 AM
    On to Pt II...

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:19:00 AM
    wow, your story really SHOWS us and doesn't just TELL us what it means to be a hunter. VEry skillful effective means of portraying the hunt. Now I am wondering if you have some weird twist to this story or if it really IS Just about hunting an animal. ON I go the next page.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Hunting is a skillful art. It is obvious you know what you're writing about because you live it. This is all so exciting. Can't wait to read part two, my friend. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Oh...I'm glad it ended here before you killed the deer! It's a deer, right? Oh, Caleb! The write was amazing! You have such a descriptive way to express the heart of a hunter...I just didn't hunt! ;) Can you imagine living in a world populated by giants who loved to eat humans???? Hmmmm...well, you're lucky cause they'd go for me...More meals for them! ;) Teasing ya! Great write.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/7/2013 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW.,...lions, my FAV animals. I got a painting of one in my office. If you go to my poem, The People and Places of My World- FB link, you can "see" it, me and my world as well. Did you really eat the heart of that buck? Biology class and dissecting did me in. That's when vegetarianism stuck! ;) Tough I'm a sworn herbivore and you a omnivore, we can still be friends. Just promise not to turn cannibalistic on me! ;)
    Hunter Avatar Painted Hunter
    Date: 5/6/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's not over yet, are such a kind may not want to read part two...And giants?...well, they'd better be smart giants, otherwise Caleb might have to try giant stew...haha...oh, Lord. You guys must think I'm a monster...seriously though...hunting is how I feed my family...lions eat when they are hungry, yes?