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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 2:32:00 PM
    :( so sad; some are still dealing with this today. Isn't that! You touch my heart Caleb.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:19:00 AM
    I will try to catch up more later, my connection is so slow, I am getting hypnotized--btw the quote you put in your last comment got me curious-- I even googled it but no dice-- is it part of a novel or something, written by somebody else-- very nicely written,wowee-- did you write that? That Red Sea line was very witty!

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:15:00 AM
    Ok that is not fair, since I see no part 2 here-- I hope you post it really soon. You sure brought the tension across there and you got me thinking (even sort of worrying) what is in the backroom--- what happened to the dad? to the kid? is this you? your brother? Very intriguing and very brave boy...Scary Dragon Lady-- we had that kind of Dragon lady in our college library. She was Conan the Librarian though.

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:02:00 AM
    You are a born storyteller, Caleb. Your descriptions are awesome, and you leave out just enough detail to keep the reader wanting more!!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Oki you make me want to know what s going to happen next..Everytime i am returning to my island at the airport im always scared i have gone over the limit of kilos of shopping and souvenirs i feel a bit in this guy s shoes..If i go over the limit i would have to pay a lot for extra kilos ..Lets see whats happening to this guy for taking bibles there..

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:18:00 PM
    This is very interesting. I'm going to t6he next. Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:15:00 PM
    I am anxiously awaiting Part 2. It wasn't until I re-read this that I really absorbed what was going on. What a brave boy to be spreading the word of Christianity in a place where it's extremely illegal to do so. Your narratives are always enjoyable, Caleb.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:42:00 AM
    Caleb....Hi! I see you're online! Listen...I think you better check the titles on both of these. You've titled them both part 1! Could get a bit confusing! ;) Can't read part 2 now...Got a class this evening I haven't finished preparing for. Will get to it later...just though you might want to make that change.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Oh....hope this turns out OK! SOMEONE is watching over them!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Very well written Caleb, you have my attention, will wait to read more, I hope it's on it's way, xxx