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Haiku - X 14 - Your Soul

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Haiku - X 14 - Your Soul




                                 Kneeling by my mother's grave
                                 All the flowers had faded away
                                    Her soul breathed on me








06.05.2013
A-L  Andresen :)                            


*Miss you mom !

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  1. Date: 1/26/2014 5:30:00 PM

    Hi Anne-Lise, my mother was the most important person in my life. I lost a big part of me when she was called. This write brought the tears to my eyes, happy tears I must add. Still, my mother's Love dwells within me. Once more, with three gentle lines you open up your heart and Love for this lady comes forth. You would be amazed at the amount of people who forget about parents so quickly when they are gone. A sad yet Lovely light my Friend. Have a good day. Later. Your Friend always....MIKE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2014 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comment my poem,Mike ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 1:26:00 AM

    Dear Anne-Lise, this poem is particularly touching to me as my mother died not long ago too. And it's so true, I felt my mother's soul breathe on me. Just a wonderful piece. Beverly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2013 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comment my poem,Beverly ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:11:00 PM

    Sad, yet powerful write!! I'm adding you to my favorite poets actually u might b the only person I have faved... In a over a year! :D- Edward

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you it is an honor! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Edward. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 11:10:00 AM

    Nice Haiku but it's so sad my friend Anne Lise but I know she is happy with our Creator....Have a great weekend..hugssss, Maria

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/18/2013 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:25:00 AM

    A beautifully sad poem my dearest friend Anne Lise. I'm so sorry for your loss. I can feel how much you love and miss your mom through this marvelous Haiku of yours. God bless you always! Thank you so much for sharing. love much, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:09:00 PM

    I am sorry for your loss. I feel for both of you. G.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2013 1:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Giorgio. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Dear Anne-Lise, No words to comment - only profound feelings. love, Kathy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/13/2013 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Kathryn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:21:00 AM

    I know too well the meaning and emotion expressed in these three brief, insightful lines... Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/12/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:29:00 PM

    This one took my breath away. Absoulutely stunning. Have a beautiful day !

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/12/2013 3:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:18:00 PM

    You can feel the sadness coming from your heart. Happy Mother's Day to you. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/11/2013 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:02:00 AM

    Wonderfull poem and one really feels the sadness.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/10/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Sabien. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:00:00 AM

    :(.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/10/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank U !
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

    I feel your sorrow. I have written a tribute to moms. You Mom Angel lives eternally. Touchy Haiku love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2013 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments my friend Manel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:01:00 AM

    i am so taken by this ku, anne...so much subtance and poignancy in just a few words... i miss my mother and father as well...tenderly scribed!... may your day be as sweet as you!..:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2013 3:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...... sooooo taken :) - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:00:00 AM

    i am so taken by this ku, anne...so much subtance and poignancy in just a few words... i miss my mother and father as well...tenderly scribed!... may your day be as sweet as you!..:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2013 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:37:00 PM

    that's a beautiful poem in memeory of your Mother, Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Anne Lise; I like this. It is nice that we visit our Mothers grave. My Mom passed away last September. Many blessings and Happy Mother's day. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:56:00 PM

    My, Anne...I don't know what to say...it's extraordinary...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Caleb. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:06:00 AM

    Very nice...and unusal.....thank you

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Judy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Oh, Anne Lise! My heart goes to you! I miss my MAMA too! She is there...in your heart. Lovely write! Your mama would be proud! Hugs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 10:21:00 AM

    So sad... and a beautiful haiku you've penned... I pray yours too will remember you when the time comes...AO

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Happy Mothers day .

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - My mother is dead. // Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:09:00 PM

    So sad :( A great honor to her, though! Loved that last line... it put me in the moment of it all.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Gripping & stunning. I bow in reverence to this Haiku.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 2:16:00 PM

    A very sad feeling. I feel for both of you. G.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Giorgio. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 1:43:00 PM

    Anne, so so touching, how i wish we were next to each other in the same city, we would have gone out and shared and shared till your feelings get a rest. Take care , stay strong, as we have no choice sometimes. Love Terry xoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's almost 2 years since my mother died Terry, feeling her soul at her grave. -I miss her a lot. ---- Yes, it had been cozy ...... You are welcome to Norway.- - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Terry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Very touching. Losing one`s parent is a sad thing. l went through this, and it is not easy to accept even now.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Ndaba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:48:00 AM

    Very true feeling it is. Where there's love and respect, vibration of heart speaks truly. My next monoku it is. Thanks...., loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will read it. - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

    It is metaphysical! Having lost both my parents at a very early age and having been on their grave many a time, this is the best way that I could express that feeling! THANK YOU!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Beautiful! I know exactly how you must feel. I've felt the same for a very long time. I especially like the note at the bottom. Very sweet... I'm posting a new haiku about my father tomorrow... Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/7/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will read it. - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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