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Cinquain Five

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Cinquain Five

Starving 
wanting affection
eating fast food
devouring a strangers embrace
Hungry

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 2:37:00 PM
    yes, sometimes the emotional hunger is tied to the physical. Sadly, not in my case. haha. I just love food!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:32:00 AM
    Great play on words and theme..Enjoyed reading this morn..So much hunger in the world in triplet _ food for the body and food for the emotion and food for the spirit are lacking today..Sara

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/6/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sadly I believe for many generations it has been lacking. We simply fail to recognize it in our own. We all hunger and there is only one place that hunger can be truly satisfied.
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Wow, I like how you connect a strangers embrace with "grabbing a quick bite". It might fill you up for a bit, but it won't satisfy (as a loved one's embrace would). Your best cinquain so for, methinks!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/6/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Tim, I am pleased you like it.
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:20:00 PM
    You Go Richard......really great!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/5/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Judy