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The Stars

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The Stars

The stars in the night
Giving light like a sunlight
Satisfy my heart

I want to reach you
Just to say something 'bout you
You are beautiful

Oh Looking at you
Remembering all my days
Hope he thinks me too

I know you're not gone
Come with me 'till the night come
Show your smile again

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:10:00 AM

    A lovely star. Beautiful! AO

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 6/1/2013 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks AO
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:23:00 PM

    Beautiful write! I enjoyed this very much. -edward

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Edward!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Love it...enter the kissing in the rain contest if you have not done so....

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/24/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well thank you for the recomendation JUdy
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Ah, I love it. Very innocently beautiful! Great job, Elai :)

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/14/2013 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harrel God bless you!
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:04:00 AM

    - A very very beautiful haiku Elai it reminds me of one night in my first meeting of my wife I thank you very much for wonderful return to a time I need to visit a little more with my better half {my lovely wife} God bless and keep you in His arms Love it.

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/9/2013 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much ReV SAMUEL MACK OMS. I am really happy to know it. God bless you too!
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:20:00 PM

    Really beautiful haiku enjoyed. Loved always, bl

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/26/2013 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you bl
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 12:16:00 PM

    - A beautiful haiku Elai - thank you! - Very well written. - Welcome to P-S oup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/6/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks anne lisse. im happy to see every comment u've shared to me!
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 4:38:00 AM

    I love the emotions here in this beautiful write my friend. I'm sure he isn't gone and he's smiling right above you...enjoyed reading..And it's a pleasure having you visit my work..Thank you..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/6/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yah thank you!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Splendid haiku,Elai:) And a big welcome to this lovely poetry family.Have a great day,and keep your creative pen working! Hugs,Arild

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/5/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you i wish it!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Elai, a nice way of satisfaction through the eyes of millions of stars. 4 wonderful haiku. Lovely, and romantic, and a hint of longing. The first was the most enjoyable imagery, however i enjoyed the way you end it with the comfort of a needed smile... thanks for the kind hi... always~ Linda

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee Date: 5/5/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Linda, it helps me a lot!