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A Ripple in Time

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A Ripple in Time

A ripple in time, we are here for a moment like fleeting vapors in this vast, great universe-- members of a divine God. Into the night sky I gaze, awed by space and time and the wide expanse of the Milky Way, a dot among endless galaxies. They spin and swirl in a dance in the gaping voids of space and blackness, their light coming to us from a time before our Earth formed. A ripple in time, we are here for a moment like fleeting vapors in this vast, great universe-- members of a divine Whole.
--for 'A Ripple In Time' Contest --written 05/05/2013

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
    Excellent, congrats on your win. A terrific poem.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:08:00 PM
    a nice ripple in time winning poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Gail's winning poem... Always & Forever xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:32:00 PM
    'like fleeting vapors'...Favorite line among many in this flawless tanka series...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 1:23:00 PM
    How beautifully your pen flowed across the page Congrats on your Number one win and well deserved it is Love Carole Cookie

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:22:00 AM
    a nice A Ripple In time winning poem :-) Congrats *LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:24:00 PM
    Congratulations, my God you do deserve winning, amazing writ. Loved it. Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 6:55:00 PM
    This is very beautiful...congratulations on your well deserved top winning poem.

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Congratulations for your top placement in the contest, Ngoc. Good poetry well deserving of the top spot. :-)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your impressive Tanka entry and win... I am impressed with your talent displayed here... Well deserved.... Great work.... Jake