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The Letter I

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The Letter I

                            ~Why The Letter I~

Why the letter "I" sometimes feels sad or happy.
If I am downhearted I cannot feel happy.

Why the letters "WE" sometimes feels strong or weak?
If I am cheerless I cannot feel stronger.

Why the letters "YOU" sometimes feels loved or hated.
If I am depressed I cannot feel love.

Why the letters "THEM" sometimes feels aggressive or connected.
If I am sadden I cannot feel aggressive.

Why the letters "OUR" sometimes feels love or possessive.
If I am rejected I cannot feel any love or possessive.I will feel
nothing. 

Why the letters "HIM" sometimes feels sexual or indifferent.
If I am consumed I cannot feel sexual, I will feel indifferent.

Why the letters "SHE" sometimes feels adored or betrayed.
If I am crying I cannot feel adored, I will feel betrayed.

Why the letters "ALL" sometimes feels friendship or abandoned.
If I am unconscious I cannot feel friendly , but will feel abandoned.                               

If I will erase ALL those words 
Will you let me Love You?.
I already Love You.



Therese Bacha
4/5/2013

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  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Hi Terry, this is so clever, and so poignant too

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/20/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Harry, hope yo are doing ok. Thank you for passing by. I did not write since a while. Feeling down lately, health wise. See u soon. Terry
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:21:00 PM
    nicely written Terry ;}

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/20/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debbie, glad you liked it. Haven't been on the sight for a long time. You are fine. Love Terry
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Just beautiful 'All' is my favourite..Unless someone feels abandoned of that :all:circle..All-sounds so beautiful..lovely thougts penned.Hope you are fine dear..i just returned from our holiday..

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/11/2013 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charmaine, will see you later. Love Terry xoxoox
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:51:00 PM
    This is an excellent quill... Thanks for sharing.... Many thanks for the Fav. 5 Thumbs up ma ...AO

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/8/2013 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank so much young man, i loved reading it. Terry xo
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:09:00 PM
    terry, I agree with Anne down here. This is UNIQUE!! Very clever the way you went through the different pronouns! And what was even cooler, that last stanza. I just love how you ended with "I already love you!"

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/7/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, thank so much for passing by me, i am glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxoxo have a great day.
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Another good one Therese.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/5/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you again so much. Terry xo
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Terry, this is unique! - Love "puzzle game" .... - Very well done. - <3 U my friend!! - If you have time ...... read my "Love Letter" too! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/5/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, I already loved the heart picture of your love letter poem, thank you that you are here. I will try to put off the TV......i laugh every time i read it. Love your honesty. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 12:17:00 PM
    wonderful write Terry.....I like the last stanza..thanks so much for stopping by...

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi again Joseph, so so happy you liked it, it is so new for me to write this kind of poem. Love Terry xo
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 9:27:00 PM
    A very strong message here Terry, love the style, great job, blessings Carl

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/4/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carl, I mean young man, its so nice to have your opinion, because i am new in those kinds of short poetry. Have a great Sunday. God Bless. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:19:00 PM
    This is quite the unique and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, Therese! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/4/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell, I am so glad you liked it, good night have a great day. Love Terry xoxo