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Memories Beyond The Door

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Memories Beyond The Door

The door remains locked
For my sanity to be
Abuse and bullying rocked
All that is in me
Survival remains the key

May 3rd, 2013

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:18:00 PM

    This is heart dropping even when you read so little. It makes me want to read more, but the truth is already completely told. It doesn't matter how sad the story, it matters because it happened. Very nice job. :) -JN

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:17:00 PM

    It is definitely more than it seems. Seemed so short yet packed with incredible intensity and pain. Great job.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 5:56:00 AM

    Wow. The brevity packs a real strong punch. I feel super honored for having such a talented poet commenting on my work now. Thanks Rick!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:11:00 AM

    Congratulations, Rick. Succinct and more powerful for it.: Red

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:19:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest Rick, my favourite form is the English Quintain

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 6:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, a very elegant poem, you are so right to keep the door closed. Terry xo

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 6:33:00 PM

    Simple but strong, I love the last line :D thank you for your kindly visit before :) wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 6:17:00 PM

    Congratulations Rick...liked this...

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 3:01:00 PM

    So much said in a few short lines.. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:28:00 PM

    short but powerful...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Few lines and very rich. Congrats Zablocki on your win.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:14:00 PM

    It's, Bu-TAH-MUS...thank you....

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 6:42:00 PM

    A deep write! I say kick the door down and then chase THEM! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Thanks for your visits Rick, I appreciate your comments. Tell me about this style, I am unfamiliar with it.