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Sedoka 7

Timothy Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Sedoka 7 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sedoka 7

ring around the moon
vividly seen in the
company of stars

this lady
right here is mine,
have you not heard?

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Good morning Tim I went back and responded to some of your responses to my responses.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/4/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Morning to you too! I will check back on them :)
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 11:58:00 AM

    I echo Becca's sentiments, I have not been dissapointed either. Well done Tim.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 3:32:00 AM

    Excellent imagery.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/3/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick... I always appreciate your comments and support :)
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 12:47:00 AM

    Awwwwww.....how romantic! Read it twice through in one go! :) Lovely, my dear. The ring around the moon symbolizing possession. :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/3/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And showing off as well... he he. I'm so happy you were able to make the connection, for I was afraid it'd be too vague.