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Every Thought of You

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Every Thought of You

Every thought of you…
Exterminates my negativity 
I reflect upon you…wishing to see you
You’re my mirror,
Reminding me that I’m so lucky to be me
Our love is like an elevator –
It transports us to many extraordinary places…
You astound me on so many levels…
It lifts our spirits up to a certain degree
Things will work out in the long run
You’re my majestic, virtuous aura,
Hovering around my worn-out body 

Every thought of you…
Is like a new star to discover in the universe 
Every thought of you…
Is like a butterfly ready to be released from its cocoon
Every thought of you…
Is as gorgeous as a maroon rose in full bloom…
You’re a blessing from up above
Showering upon my life…renewing my self-esteem 
Trust me – you’re not a loathsome curse

Every thought of you…
Is like reacquainting with an old friend 
I cherish the thought of you 
You’re my heart’s melody – 
What do you expect me to do? 
You make my heart sparkle anew 
Our love is like a train – 
It can transport us to our homeland
Our hope and happiness has no end…
Things will be just fine, so have no worries in mind
We’ll struggle together…
We’ll walk side by side
We’ll live our dreams forever…
His love will swallow us like a tide
You’re the dawn of my rapturous future…  

Every thought of you…
Is like a new galaxy to capture in the deep, deep universe 
Every thought of you…
Is like a mother giving birth to a beloved child 
Every thought of you…
Is as striking as the jungle, full of vigor and wondrous wildlife…
You’re a dove, sending me enduring, genuine love
Rinsing away the strife…reestablishing my self-esteem 
Trust me – you’re my angel, passing on your mirth 

It’s crystal clear – 
Your beauty put me under your 
ENCHANTING spell 
Soon, we’ll meet our destiny
Our success is drawing near…

We’ll complete this expedition
Soon, we’ll be walking that road of recovery 
It’s quite obvious that you’re in my everyday thoughts –  
Soon, you’ll understand me and accept reality 
We’ll be walking that road of recovery
And complete our mission 

You’re a tranquil heaven,
Not a devious hell 
Every thought of you is a submission
To your perpetual positivity

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Yes definitely in love....beautiful poem..

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 5/3/2013 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's only a crush, Donna! xD hahah Thank you *bows*
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 2:25:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem David! - (Wondering if you're "a little" in love ...) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 5/3/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~~ Thanks, Anne! I actually have a crush on someone in NewYork. :) haha good guess tho! -DWB P.S. But im in CA.... xD